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Edso
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| Fri Jan 26, 2007 6:31 am |
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Scholesgoal
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It was not too bad. you should have written a part without much dialogue. You should cut the swearing out and make the kids younger and it could make a good childrens book. 3/10. Some books that have been published would get less than that.
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| Wed Jan 31, 2007 12:31 am |
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